Dragonworld
This was their favourite time of day to fly.
As the glowing, crimson sun dipped down below the vast horizon, retreating to allow night to take its place, the dragons took flight.
The sky looked beautiful: wisps of pillow-like clouds seemed to part in front of them as they flexed their powerful wings. Like sails from ancient ships, the wings beat in the dying embers of the sun’s fire, embracing what little warmth remained. Thousands of tiny scales that covered the beasts’ bodies glistened like rubies in the dazzling light.
As they reached full speed, leaving the world far beneath them, they almost grinned as they thought about where they were going. There would be others like them there. It would be paradise…
They thought there would be other dragons and they would be allies but unfortunately they thought wrong… After they arrived, which was 2 hours of flight until they arrived to a volcano but to them this has no effect as they are fire dragons, so they head on into the volcano they meet these black dragons about 5 of them and 1 bigger black dragon by the name of Vulthuryol an ancient dragon that can speak so intelligent in fact it taught it’s fellow dragons to speak too… They took one look at the 9 red dragons, and growled. BLACK, BLACK and also more BLACK. How were they going to get out of this….
I like that you used ellipsis, it makes me want to see what happens next.
ReplyDeleteI like that you wrote BLACK in capitals three times because it is like you are shouting.
Have you thought about adding more punctuation?